Someone I admire
In life, everyone can usually admire a well-known person or a rich businessman in the world. But for me, the person that I respect and admire with all my heart is my best friend. The first time I met her is about 5 years ago when I transferred to another school in 10th grade. She is an extroverted and generous person, and these are 2 qualities that make me fall with her immediately. I believe that her most excellent character is extroverted. Because at that time, I was not good at getting in conversation with others, I always wanted to meet and make friends with outgoing people. My best friend was this type of person. She was so enthusiastic about all the school activities. She often took part in many works from debate contests, singing to volunteer work. In my eyes, she was a pioneer, a person always at the top and received a lot of attention and respect from her friends. Despite being admired, my friend did not become arrogant at all. She often chatted with me, taught me how to find interesting topics to talk and connected me to others in a collective conversation. She was even afraid that I was not able to get along with other friends, so she took me to volunteer and introduced new friends to me. Because of her, I was not lonely and became more open- minded in communication. Besides, if a friendship wants to be strong and lasting, the essential character a friend should have is generosity. All relationships can go through conflict and argument, so generosity is the medicine that can heal these wounds. Throughout 5 years, my friend and I have had many quarrels. After them, instead of getting angry and stopping playing with me for a while, she always apologized and actively reconciled with me even if I was wrong. Her actions helped me consider my mistakes and correct them in time to maintain our friendship. Honestly, I really admire her behavior which makes me find that she adores me, and we both strive to build a lasting friendship. To sum up, my friend is a positive influence on me. Because of her companionship, I am better day by day in many aspects. She is a wonderful and admirable friend. So, I will absolutely try my best to keep our relationship forever.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-09-23 | Nguyễn Tiết Nghi | 56 | view |
| 2021-09-22 | ngonguyetminhthu | 11 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, honestly, if, really, so, thus, well, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.0 271% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 6.8 279% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 68.0 5.60731707317 1213% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1806.0 965.302439024 187% => OK
No of words: 394.0 196.424390244 201% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58375634518 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 3.73543355544 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7894544163 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 106.607317073 199% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53807106599 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 283.868780488 197% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 1.53170731707 1306% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 8.94146341463 268% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6006986974 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.25 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.23603664747 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 3.70975609756 566% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0520695388405 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0230492417973 0.103423049105 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552613684679 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0520695388405 0.15604864568 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 40.7170731707 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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