Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I am of the opinion that governments should provide all citizens with the internet access for free. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, people should have access to the free internet for educational purposes. In fact, it is no secret that education is of great importance in every person's life today, so many people attend universities to learn the subject of their interest from professors. But, with the vast amount of knowledge and the fast development pace of every sphere, it is virtually impossible for the learners to learn everything in their classes. Therefore, they need additional resources to enhance their knowledge. Today, one of the most important ways to acquire this extra knowledge is through the internet. In fact, the internet allows students to have access to a limitless amount of papers, many instructive YouTube videos, and online courses for students to educate themselves with. Thus, for a society to have highly-educated people, governments should offer ready access to the internet to every citizen. For instance, during the quarantines that resulted from the COVID-19 pandemic, I learned a lot from YouTube videos about my major, which is electrical engineering, in addition to the information offered in the university classes. Had I not had free access to the internet, I wouldn't be as erudite as I am now.
Moreover, many people rely on the internet in order to communicate with each other. It is crystal clear that socializing with others is one of the most essential parts of our lives. In the past, when people lived in small rural areas, they lived in proximity to their beloved ones, so it was fairly comfortable for them to see and interact with each other. Now, however, most people live in large cities far from their family members and friends. Nevertheless, having access to the internet provide them with the opportunity to interact with them in a variety of ways, such as making video calls. As a result, since it is important for people to socialize with their circle, preventing themselves from getting depressed, governments should offer free internet to people.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that governments should provide people with the free internet access. That's because people use the internet for education and to socialize with other individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1988.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11053984576 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77174949763 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506426735219 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6858476544 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.631578947 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4736842105 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26315789474 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311471128648 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116261055379 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835414609415 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228079524009 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199659746658 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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