Some people think that robots are important for humans future development. Others think that robots have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In cutting-edge era, many individuals reckon that machines are crucial for homos further advancement. however, some believe that bionics have negative impact on community. people have their own views behind this notion. I will discuss views of both along with my opinion in upcoming fragments.
Science and technology has almost touched the peak of development by making many gadgets and machines which makes human's life comfortable. Nowadays, most folks think that for coming time progress of artificial intelligence is prominent because it can do more and more tasks rather than humans. since it can do long time consuming works in short time, it saves much time. By the help of this companies, productivity can be increased. Moreover, AI can do work in small way without any problem and can solve tricky issues. Apart from that, it is machine so it can do work for long hours with full charge which individuals cannot do. Nevertheless, robots can do dangerous work which may be risky for people by which companies can save important life of their employees.
however, the coin have always two sides if robots are pivotal for human than it also deleterious for community. Firstly, of bionic will be used for future evolvement it means population of robots will increased on work place and less individuals will do work which lead to increase in unemployment. since poverty of that nation will rise, the economic conditions will be badly effected with it. Furthermore, if machines do work rather than people. individuals become lazy and their many skills will begin to end. further, they become dependent on machines and thru will be unable to understand their own duties. In end, all this is very harmful for people and negative effects on society.
In nutshell, it can be reiterated that although robots have so many positive effect on society and crucial for further growth, the negative impact cannot be ignored by anyone. In my opinion, if it can be used in limit then it will give good results in future .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, apart from, in short, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 7.85571142285 280% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99703264095 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6227506114 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560830860534 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1781507986 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.85 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 42.0 5.01903807615 837% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226769802636 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067588912432 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610611338737 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150175179074 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479126917817 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.