Some people think that men and women have different qualities which is a why men are suitable for some type of job and women for different type of jobs . Do agree or disagree?
Gone are the days when women were considered to be the weaker member of the society. Presently, in the air of modernization, the male dominating society is now turning into an egalitarian society. Some civilians are of the opinion that suitability of distinct jobs depend on the calibre of both the genders. Here, I would like to discord with the given statement firmly.
A bunch of points can be mentioned to substantiate my opinion. To commence with, in patriarchal society, women were supposed to be in home boundries in order to perform household responsibilities but nowadays, they prove themselves by showing their exceptional flair in every field like politics, science, education and health. Moreover, as inflation is on the nerves of the people in this contemporary epoch. Therefore, everyone is engaged in white colour jobs where women rub shoulder with the man for the purpose of earning two square meal. It is apparently seen that, there is no place for discrimination between two genders in working sector on account of potential.
Probing ahead, a revolution is seen in taste of a men as a begin their attentiveness in stitching, cooking and fashion which were only performed by women in early times. Besides this, men who are living abroad for different purposes, manage their household chores themselves. So, we can conclude that both men and women are equal potential to perform similar type of activity and perception of people in this statement do not occur any position in this equalitarian society.
To recapitulate, God bless both the genders with equal empowerment. Therefore, it is a good fortune that the difference between men and women is diappearing in this globalisation world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, but, if, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15053763441 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01297920744 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9070178779 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.642857143 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265206187021 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732743727883 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645448350028 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141977654242 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518530106691 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.