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...e today specially the modes of transport .keeping in mind the various advantages t...
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...cars to come and pick us up unlike buses .we can easily manage our travel accordin...
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...r ,during initial months of my first job ,i used to travel on bus and I would alwa...
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...nd interrupted route that bus would take .Even sometimes I would get scolded by my...
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...colded by my boss for being late to work .Then after few years of working ,I affor...
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...e me ,many people prefer cars over buses .That’s why I believe in upcoming time ,t...
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...s .That’s why I believe in upcoming time ,there would be more cars than they are t...
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...rsonal space than other public transport .we can travel wherever we want without a...
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...sonal experience,during summer vacations,I used to travel with my family on train...
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...enience of carrying only limited luggage .we were never able to enjoy ourselves on...
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...will be fewer in use than they are today .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, while, even so, in addition, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1919.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61298076923 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63861452521 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 104.0 20.1344086022 517% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 305.34816194 48.9658058833 624% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 479.75 100.406767564 478% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 104.0 20.6045352989 505% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.5 5.45110844103 468% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 54.0 5.5376344086 975% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308876986155 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.284225549915 0.076458572812 372% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.186421134586 0.0737576698707 253% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284225549915 0.150856017488 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.186421134586 0.0645574589148 289% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 52.3 11.7677419355 444% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -25.62 58.1214874552 -44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 42.7 10.1575268817 420% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.64 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.68 8.01818996416 146% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 10.002688172 275% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 43.6 10.0537634409 434% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.