Some educationalists say every child should be taught to play musical instrument..
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Learning musical instruments are becoming popular among children. According to few educationalists, teaching musical instruments to every child should be mandatory. This essay will argue that why learning muscial instruments should not be entirely necessary for every child.
Some educationists believe that learning how to play an instrument can help children in developing technical skill, which will bolster the sense of achievement in early age. It will evetually build self confidence that they can develop any skills just by proper learning. For instance, a study has shown that children who learn musical instruments in young age are more confident than those who dont. Therefore, few educationist believe that learning instrument can help in the development of personality, so that every child should learn an instrument.
Despite the fact that it might help in the development of personality, It is also believe that it is completely preposterous to teach every child how to play an instrument. Every child has a different personality and do not like same things to do. For example, some children are more energetic and prefer to do more physical activities. For hyper active children it might not be an enjoyable activity and therefore it wont be productive in their development. Instead by participating in activities that they are more interested in could help in the development of personality.
This easay argued that few educationists have flawed understanding of teaching instruments to every child and underestimate the affects of other activities. In my opinion, learning any activity that makes a child enjoy that could help in the development of personality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45038167939 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16753423332 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507633587786 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0009276307 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240649728459 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101145479319 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733714119462 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170369528737 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710486661022 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.