Some people think that individuals who make a lot of money are most successful. Others think that those who contribute to society like scientists and teachers are most successful.
Discuss both views and give your opinion?
The definition of successful has always been controversial. Tusuallyo the majority, the amount of money one possesses is as equal as their success. But personally, I believe that wealth should not be the only core value in measuring accomplishments.
In the world nowadays where money is considered as power, people tend to fall in the illustration of abundance and lose track of the true value. No one can deny that the lap of luxury usually comes with accessibilities, and satisfaction. That’s why those who get hold of high salaries or possess a luxurious life are usually depicted as the model of the generations, as elite. They also received more respect from the community because of the value that they brought into the picture. Commoners sometimes gained beneficial advantages from the elite such as financial aid, well-paying jobs. Especially during the closest pandemic due to the infectious spread of the Coronavirus, many civilians live on thanks to the support from wealthy people who provided numerous amounts of food, necessaries and some of the high society even support the others with places to live.
But that’s led to a conclusion, the money that they possess is less important than the help that they’ve dedicated to society. Due to that extent, scientists and teachers are also considered as successful, not because of their giant assets but their contributions to the world. They’ve sacrificed all their life to improve the quality of civilization. Through decades, scientists have been working non stop to provide us with countless breakthroughs that have changed mankind. The discoveries in medicine have saved the lives of thousands of people. Parallel with scientists, teachers also should be respectfully looked up to, thanks to their contributions in educating the young generations- the future of the world. Teachers have provided students with not only knowledge but also with social skills and they have shaped the manner of hundreds of students. Many commoners have become famous figures who have handsome salaries due to the teachers’ silent dedication.
To conclude, wealth may be praised as the successful paragons at the moment but the contribution of educators and scientists will always remain as a main factor in the equation of success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 799, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, well, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28219178082 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98318298917 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558904109589 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4676911644 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.111111111 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2777777778 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147450281133 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420686230648 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398793367852 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955635454609 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201398741788 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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