people think that in the near future cars will be driven by computers, not people. Why? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In this contemporary world, everything is being automated, including cars. For many people, self-driving cars could do more harm than good while others opine the opposite. In my perspective, letting car driving itself can have both merits and demerits.
On the bright side, self-driving cars on the road would be a technology breakthrough. Currently, Tesla has already developed their driverless car and some are actually sold. This development could prevent road accidents caused by careless drivers. For instance, when a person is drunk, a self-driving car could drive this person home with ease. This can be helpful for avoiding casualties.
Another advantage of this state-of-the-art invention is that the government can shift a large amount of the national budget to other fields. With driverless cars, there will be no traffic congestion. Self-driving cars would maintain a smooth traffic flow so that road police are not necessary anymore. Also, with these automatic cars, people could spend their travelling time on other things as they do not need to concentrate on the road.
Turning to the other side of the argument, overusing computerized-car can be an issue. To be more precise, when computers do all the work, people could lose their jobs . Many drivers are not needed so this development can lead to the roketting rate of unemployment. This often leads to an increasing rate of crime. Not only will the rate of crime increase, self-driving cars could be sky-high because of its convenience. Besides, driving skill could be a forgotten skill forever.
For all the aforementioned benefits and drawbacks, this development is extremely functional and financially-efficient in the long term. Personally, I opine that the disadvantage of self-driving cars are inconsiderable
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, if, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24606663829 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589285714286 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3209042398 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.6 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160044603793 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544232038287 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390445144972 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944738942456 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349629469145 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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