The internet has made knowledge immediately available to people through computers and smartphones all around the world. Much of this knowledge is also free. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
In this contemporary world, the internet brings us plenty of knowledge and also recreational content. For many people, despite the benefits of the internet, there is also its dark side. However, there are both merits and demerits of getting information through the internet. In my perspective, the trend of accessing knowledge by internet will have more advantages than disadvantages
On the bright side, looking up information on the internet can be very efficient. One of the main positives of it is that people can access this intel with ease. As the internet is available everywhere around us, knowledge can be absorbed in any location on the Earth, day and night. For instance, when a person wants to know about an attraction, they can just google it on their phone. This can be helpful for acquiring intelligence.
Secondly, most of the documents, contents, recreations, and so on can be accessed without any charges. What I mean is that when you are surfing the internet, if you see handy documents, you will be able to download them to your device in less than a minute. In addition, this way of absorbing intelligence benefits the impoverished, being a key to better living conditions for these people.
Turning to the other side of the argument, not all the content on the internet is appropriate. To be more precise, some of the content is misleading. Using vaccination as an example. Some people believe that vaccination will lead to blindness or long-term illnesses. These people spread their belief, not only affect their own well-being but also damage the healthiness of a whole community
Another issue is copyright infringement. In other words, many contents are spread without the permission of the original owners. This is a concerning issue as it affects the finance of content creators and violates intellectual property rights.
All things considered, using the internet for knowledge brings more advantages than drawbacks. Contents must have the allowance of owners to be acquired.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 115, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i mean, in addition, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15902140673 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9488940019 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565749235474 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6146345315 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.35 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.35 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235999974948 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688939439615 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710939382769 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120730649432 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919364454319 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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