The breakthroughs in medical science are by far the most significant advances in world society over the last two centuries.
Discuss this statement and give your opinion.
It is stated that medical science has contributed a lot in terms of making the world move forward during the last two hundred years. I agree with this statement as medical science has been able to successfully cope with the horrible outbreaks of diseases during last centuries.
Medical science has helped the world to progress in a better way. With the identification of treatment for several diseases, life expectancy has increased notably during last couple of centuries. We have witnessed multiple diseases during last century including Spanish-flu, polio and scientists have been able to find cure for these diseases successfully. Currently, we are in the era of pandemic and it is worth mentioning that scientists have been able to invent vaccine for covid19 in record time. By producing vaccine, medics have helped in saving thousands of lives.
Medical scientists have also contributed significantly in improving living style. By identifying the causes of diseases, science has helped us to adjust our food intake accordingly. For instance, we are well aware of the consequences that excess sugar intake can have on our health. Secondly, advanced medical equipment is highly productive in identifying the disease during early stages and that helps in timely treatment. Furthermore, medical scientists are performing successful transplants of different organs of human body which has improved living for thousands of people. Similarly, partially helping in eye sight and hearing has been one of the significant inventions.
In the conclusion, I would say that medical science has contributed a lot in the progress of the world. Medical science has saved millions of lives by inventing cure of several diseases and helped many in improving their living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 612, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
...people. Similarly, partially helping in eye sight and hearing has been one of the signifi...
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Line 7, column 198, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun in seems to be countable; consider using: 'many ins'.
Suggestion: many ins
...ing cure of several diseases and helped many in improving their living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40942028986 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92913887471 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536231884058 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.47285003 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.5333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184054171494 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706232996354 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551308744471 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130825770509 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538658636557 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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