Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with.
Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion.
It is agreed globally that things made of plastic material are unhealthy for environment. The usage of plasctis products can cause issues like increased pollution and blockages. This is responsibility of us and the state authorities to take action for minimizing this issue.
Plastic products are harmful for environment. The fundamental reason is that these products are not decomposable. It is said that plastic bottles or bags will stay for hundreds of years in the mud, but it will not decompose. This causes soil pollution which has negative impact on tree plantation. Moreover, Plastic bags are the biggest reason in blockages in draining systems. These blockages are responsible for causing pollution. The blockages in rain water draining system can cause serious damages to the life and property of the people living in that area. Plastic materials thrown in wild areas are not only damaging the natural beauty of that area, but also causing harm to the lives of animal who can eat this plastic as food.
This situation demands a prompt response from the society. As an individual, it is our responsibility to make sure that use of plastic in our daily life is minimized. We should make it a habit to utilize reuseable material such as cloth bags or decomposible material like paper. From the prospective of government, all steps should be taken to ensure that the utilization of plastic material is minimized. Use of plastic bags in shopping stores should be banned and plastic should be dumped at proper place. Futhermore, government should take steps to educate people about the harms of using plastic. Another step that should be taken by authorities to compensate plastic industry to shift their product line and move away from plastic materials.
In the conclusion, I would say that it is known fact that use of plastic build products are damaging the environment. These products are causing pollution and disturbing the whole ecosystem. It is the high time to take action and hault the use of plastic in our life. These actions should be taken at personal level and government level as well.
You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similer to each other . You don’t’ fully agree with this opinion.
Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper . In your letter
Say which points in the article you agree with
Explain ways in which your town centers is different from most other town centers
Offer to give a guided tour of our town to the writer of the article
3:40
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have gone through your article published in a newspaper on 17th of March. I am writing this letter to give my review about that reading. Though it was very well written, I disagree a little and I will explain that below.
To begin with, I would say that you piece of writing was on a great topic. In your article, you have managed to eloborate the similarities in different cities of our country in the best possible manner. I agree with your concern about the traffic situation in most of the cities which is not good at all. Moreover, you are rightly highlighted that the parks developed by the municipal cousils are very well maintained in almost every town.
However, I disagree about your opinion that all towns offer same level of tourist attractions. In my town, Gilgit, there are hindreds of tourist spots that open for public. There are some historical places, for example Altit and Baltit forts and there several natural lakes like sheosar lake and rama lake. I would love to host you for a visit to my town, I am sure you will have an amazing experience here. Kindly honour me by accepting my invitation.
Your faithfully,
Bilal Ahmed
Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with.
Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion.
4:24
There are certain kind of people who are always looking for trying something new in their life. On the other hand, a group of humans only prefer opting usual or common things that are tested before. Both group of people have the reason for their choices, but I believe former kind of people are governing the world.
People who try to use already tested ways are usually more careful in their routine life. They have a point of view that life is too important to risk for something that has not been tested before. Similarly, they think that to visit a new place during vacation is not a good idea, because you may end up not liking the place and that will waste your vacations. Moreover, they believe that opting for the track that was not travelled before may bring an unpleasent event.
On the contrary, there are several people who tend to try innovative ideas. This kind of people are usually more optimistic in their lives and tend to deliver positive vibes. Though trying new things may turn out to be a bad experience, it will still be a good learning. This group of people have a belief that we get the life once and we should get the max out of it. So, we should try different things and lead way for others to follow. Furthermore, it is argued by this kind of people that exploring new places bring sense of achievement which is an important element to keep ourselves motivated.
In my opinion, our world needs both kinds of people to maintain a sound balance in the activities perfomed around the globe. There are several jobs that require people who prefer to work on repetitive tasks. However, I believe that world has grown because of people who tend to risk for trying innovative ideas. We have found several beautiful valleys and discovered continents because of this tendency to go for something new. Similarly, technology has brought a revolution in our way of living and this is all because of executing innovation ideas.
In the conclusion, I would argue that world consists of people who prefer going for innovative ideas, and the people who will try to limit themselves with tested stuff to minimize the risk. I believe both types of people are essential to maintain the healthy balance of activities in the world. However, I am certain that leaders in every field are those who opt for taking risk of trying something different and innovative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, similarly, so, still, well, for example, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 50.0 13.1623246493 380% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 26.0 7.85571142285 331% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 29.0 10.4138276553 278% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 45.0 7.30460921844 616% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 123.0 24.0651302605 511% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 151.0 41.998997996 360% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 5287.0 1615.20841683 327% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 1096.0 315.596192385 347% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82390510949 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.75377186848 4.20363070211 137% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49293030601 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 444.0 176.041082164 252% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.405109489051 0.561755894193 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1639.8 506.74238477 324% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 39.0 5.43587174349 717% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 61.0 16.0721442886 380% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6216519348 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6721311475 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9672131148 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.96721311475 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38176352705 434% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 28.0 8.67935871743 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 19.0 3.4128256513 557% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351500302458 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710532994343 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922269961571 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13412550657 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156600873664 0.056905535591 275% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 202.0 78.4519038076 257% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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