Summarize ideas in listening and reading

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Summarize ideas in listening and reading

The main idea of both the reading and the lecture is about the zebra mussel, whether they are a threat to North America's freshwater fish or not. In this respect, the writer provides three reasons why these species can be unstoppable dominants of these areas. On the other hand, the lecturer contradicts this idea, claiming there are ways to control the spread of zebra mussels, therefore they are not serious threats.
First, both the passage and the lecture talk about the tremendous ways these species can spread. In this respect, the author talks about the unstoppable invasion of these species, using the ship's bottom. However, the lecturer states that the reason people couldn't control the spread of them in Europe's water was because of not having enough knowledge about them. Moreover, she explains how with the usage of saltwater and ocean, their growth in freshwater can be limited.
Secondly, the writer discusses zebra mussels are able to dominate their habitat without any predators feeding on them. Conversely, the lecturer repudiates this notion. He declares it might be true that they can become dominant at the beginning, but after a while, other animals will eat them. As an example, he explains how local birds in Europe started to feed on zebra mussels. Also, he emphasizes the birds' ability, claiming they can eat a lot and utterly stop the high rate of reproduction of these species.
Finally, the author mentions the effect of zebra mussels on the overall fish population and competition for nutrients with other fish. On the other hand, the lecturer refutes this idea. In this vein, he mentions although they can have negative effects on some species, they can have positive impacts on other types of fish. As an instance, he asserts how bottom freshwater fish benefit from them, and their population can increase.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 256, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... lecturer states that the reason people couldnt control the spread of them in Europes w...
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Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'birds'' or 'bird's'?
Suggestion: birds'; bird's
... zebra mussels. Also, he emphasizes the birds ability, claiming they can eat a lot an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, finally, first, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 12.0772626932 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 22.412803532 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1373.03311258 112% => OK
No of words: 305.0 270.72406181 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0393442623 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42253595685 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 145.348785872 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547540983607 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 419.366225166 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4381833922 49.2860985944 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0625 110.228320801 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 21.698381199 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06452816374 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.04739128791 0.272083759551 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0209018511644 0.0996497079465 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458704851827 0.0662205650399 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0360844266375 0.162205337803 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477425423893 0.0443174109184 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 63.6247240618 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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