More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why?
Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this contemporary era, many couples decide to not have children at the young age of their marriage. This trend of having children at a somewhat older age is new to our society and mainly influenced by their own respective careers that they want to achieve. Despite some obvious disadvantages of this trend, I believe that these can be outweighed by the advantages.
On the one hand, there are numerous benefits of having children at some later age. Firstly, both the individuals of a couple get more time to focus on their career progressions. Furthermore, people now-a-days prefer to get settled first over having a child. Secondly, this is a good decision, as if they achieve financial stability first then they will be able to provide all the required amenities to their child without any burden. For instance, if parents do not possess a stable lifestyle or a proper family planning before adding a new member to the family, which is rarely possible at a young age, this financial instability or improper planning can ruin their career and negatively affect the future of their offspring as well. Finally, having child at a little older age also provides some time for the proper planning for the family.
On the other hand, this trend also has some drawbacks. The first drawback is, if a couple decides to have a child at a later age, they will not be able to take care of their child as they are more career-oriented. For instance, a child growing without the love and time of his/her parents can often lead to being a victim of depression. Secondly, the child might feel lonely sometimes as both the parents head to their work, leaving the child in the hands of a caretaker or maid.
In conclusion, I would argue that the benefits of having a kid at some later age are much more than the drawbacks that are associated with it. As the child gets to live a healthy lifestyle with better amenities, a financially stable family and muchmore, whereas, disadvantages can be like kids can get alone at sometimes as parents become career-oriented.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78370786517 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73386481998 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497191011236 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3474140595 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.533333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7333333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202714635358 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816466130169 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470185875935 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136792155098 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529497783305 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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