Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
For over a century, people's lives are improved and the demand for entertainment highly increases which lead to sports becoming more crucial. Hosting a global sports event in some countries is a matter of pride while some people believe that it can lead to some bad consequences. In my opinion, I agree that holding a sport event brings more consequences than goods.
Firstly, hosting an international sports event can make that country more knowable and stimulate tourism. Since it is being held in the country, people will travel there to spectate the match, to cheer their favourite teams, so the need for accommodation, food, etc will significantly rise. Therefore, people will spend money there and get to acquire more knowledge about that country. For example, the 1988 Summer Olympic Games in Seoul - one of the most successful sports events ever held has raised the number of employed people by more than 300000 and the GDP for one person had tripled to 6300.
Secondly, holding a global sports event might lead to environmental pollution, noise pollution, and losses. As much as tourists come to the country, the amount of trash and noise will grow. Besides, constructions like stadium, subway, railtrack, etc will be built and the country will cost a fortune for this. To be into details, the 2008 Beijing Olympic had cost nearly $40 billion to build subway lines, airport, road, and many other sports venues.
To conclude, hosting an international sports event has both advantages and disadvantages. In my point of view, I believe that holding a sports event can bring about many irreparable consequences in a short time
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'sport'.
Suggestion: sport
...tainment highly increases which lead to sports becoming more crucial. Hosting a global...
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Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...becoming more crucial. Hosting a global sports event in some countries is a matter of ...
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Line 5, column 28, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... to 6300. Secondly, holding a global sports event might lead to environmental pollu...
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Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...point of view, I believe that holding a sports event can bring about many irreparable ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06296296296 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73017848112 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581481481481 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4688825529 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.153846154 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321218329718 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115405906335 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103916476063 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199254172442 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103938191361 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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