Education has generated mixed feelings in the general public. Some people said that the tuition from elementary school to tertiary school should be free, which allows people of any economic backgrounds going to school. In my perspective, I think free education is an acceptable idea.
On the one hand, free tuition gives many benefits that will help to develop the country. Firstly, teaching without paying a fee will offer more educational opportunities for people of all classes. Therefore, they will be universalized with basic or even sound knowledge and skills that do not need to worry about anything. When people are all trained, it will create a high quality workforce and we can have higher results in all fields. These things make the economy become better and useful to expand the country. Secondly, when more children can go to school despite the poverty, it will increase the social quality and citizen intellect. This will lead to less crime and assuagement of social problems.
On the other hand, somebody states that it is impossible for free education due to financial problem. In their opinion, it will become a huge burden on the government and they will not have enough money for other sectors such as healthcare and infrastructure. Focusing on education will cause an imbalance in dominating money for investments and projects that bring advantages more quickly and effectively for the national economy. Nevertheless, I think that free education is an investment that will be long-termefficiency although we may have difficulties at first. After this time, the young educated generation would be the foundation for developing the country because they were equipped with the basic knowledge, which creates a high quality workforce.
In conclusion, I agree with the opinion of free education although it may cost an enormous amount of money in the short term. It helps us improve life quality and develop the country.
Education has generated mixed feelings in the general public. Some people said that the tuition from elementary school to tertiary school should be free, which allows people of any economic backgrounds going to school. In my perspective, I think free education is an acceptable idea.
On the one hand, free tuition gives many benefits that will help to develop the country. Firstly, teaching without paying a fee will offer more educational opportunities for people of all classes. Therefore, they will be universalized with basic or even sound knowledge and skills that do not need to worry about anything. When people are all trained, it will create a high quality workforce and we can have higher results in all fields. These things make the economy become better and useful to expand the country. Secondly, when more children can go to school despite the poverty, it will increase the social quality and citizen intellect. This will lead to less crime and assuagement of social problems.
On the other hand, somebody states that it is impossible for free education due to financial problem. In their opinion, it will become a huge burden on the government and they will not have enough money for other sectors such as healthcare and infrastructure. Focusing on education will cause an imbalance in dominating money for investments and projects that bring advantages more quickly and effectively for the national economy. Nevertheless, I think that free education is an investment that will be long-termefficiency although we may have difficulties at first. After this time, the young educated generation would be the foundation for developing the country because they were equipped with the basic knowledge, which creates a high quality workforce.
In conclusion, I agree with the opinion of free education although it may cost an enormous amount of money in the short term. It helps us improve life quality and develop the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, even so, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19426751592 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85645888778 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579617834395 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7610509981 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9411764706 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335130789406 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108836944411 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.17919666897 0.0667982634062 268% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278383873176 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.338619561573 0.056905535591 595% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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