An increasing number of people are buying what they need online
what are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?
In this century, the word “shopping online” is no longer strange to everyone. Although there are many advantages, in contrast to it there are still disadvantages.
Looking at the consumer, their first benefit when buying online is that they get discounts without having a chance. With this benefit, they can not only choose their favorite items at affordable prices but also have the right to compare between many different products. However, the most disadvantageous thing for customers is that they cannot try on products, especially garments. Unless they are famous brands in the world, they share the same size regulations or related things, otherwise, consumers will not be able to know if the product is suitable for them. As the result, nowadays, a thousand funny pictures and videos about online purchases are the wrong size or not suitable for users. Not only that, with easy purchases, consumers will easily suffer from online shopping addiction syndrome and wasteful consumption without consideration.
As for manufacturers, they don't need to spend millions of dollars every year to hire unsuitable positions. In the past, as a marketing campaign, big brands competed to open stores anywhere to promote their brands. But with the current technology era, they only need to open in attractive places like shopping centers. A survey shows that shoppers just want to go to the store to try on the items they like and then order online. That is why they encourage customers to book online with promotions even though they can save a lot. However, the biggest disadvantage of these companies is the cost of shipping to each shopper instead of just going to the stores.
In conclusion, although the advantages and disadvantages of both sides are the same, we see that online shopping is still a great market to grow. Not only that, but this is also a shifting trend in the near future
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 245, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... also have the right to compare between many different products. However, the most disadvantag...
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Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...sideration. As for manufacturers, they dont need to spend millions of dollars every...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, still, then, as for, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03821656051 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73214257067 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595541401274 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0944045308 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.875 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258755111516 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776645370543 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543795103049 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146333429151 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323438912396 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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