Claim: People who say they are bored should look inward rather than blaming the circumstances in which they find themselves.
Reason: Boredom arises from a lack of imagination and self-motivation.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Nowadays, people usually kill the time by playing video games or browsing on their phone when they are bored. It already become the new normal to people’s life, as long as they keep scorlling, the feed is endless. Therefore, if someone says that they are bored it might be a good sign.
Firstly, they say that they are bored could because they are tired of everyone are playing on their phone and keep stimulate their brain with another scrolling. This mean the person itself is trying find a way out rather than just following the crowed. Also, as they could not change others or render the trend, saying they are bored might be a signal that they trying to find others who just feel the same as they do. Therefore, it would be wrong to critize that one is blaming the circumstance rather than improve on itself when the environment is actually the casue.
Secondly, the reason is flawed as it assumes that one who are bored is because it is not creative or passionate enough. Take a look of the reality, in 2020, lots of factory closed or shut down because of the covid-19 pandemic. Worker are forced to ’take a break’ that they did not plan. Moreover, many people want to return to their work position as their saving could sustain them through out the pandemic. Thus, they feel bored are not because they are not motiviated rather they just do not have the power to reconiliate the situation.
Finally, there are indeed some people are constantly complaining about boredom while also not trying to find a way to solve it. For instance, the people who are just lazy but still looking for a sense of achivement. This part of population might need some guidence or education to get out of lazeness.
In conclusion, people who are bored mostly are because they did not have the power to change the situation or don’t know how to
change it. However, there is also some people who are just purly lazy. Either way, both people needs education or guidance on such behaviour to improve their living quality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...the power to reconiliate the situation. Finally, there are indeed some people ar...
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Suggestion:
...hange the situation or don’t know how to change it. However, there is also some p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 357.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67787114846 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29964653223 2.79657885939 82% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504201680672 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.699509386 60.3974514979 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.7777777778 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61111111111 5.21951772744 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239189003829 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768408029526 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477566212621 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122579046847 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547301059252 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 48.8420337079 141% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 12.1743820225 68% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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