The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world
The six pie charts compare the proportion of water was used by six regions in the world for three purposes including industrial, agricultural and domestic. Overall, it can be seen that agriculture is the common demand for water in the world except for North America and Europe.
People in North America and Europe use the highest percentage of water for industrial use, at 48% and 53% respectively while this is the lowest figure in South America. Just 39% of water in North America and 32% of that in Europe are used for agriculture, whereas South America use three-fourths percentage for this purpose. The proportion of water uses for domestic is lowest in North America and Europe, at 13% for the former and 15% for the latter.
Africa, Central Asia, and Southeast Asia witness the hight proportion of water for agriculture, at 84%, 88% and 81% respectively. Interestingly, Central Asia and South East Asia have the same figure for domestic water, at 7%. The pecentage of water is used for industrial in Southeast East Asia is 12%, which is nearly twice as much as the figure in Central Asia.
- In many western countries there is an increasing number of couples choosing to have no children Discuss the advantages and disadvantages to couples having no children and give your opinion 87
- The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city center from 2003 2012 78
- In many western countries there is an increasing number of couples choosing to have no children Discuss the advantages and disadvantages to couples having no children and give your opinion 61
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- In the future all cars buses and trucks will be driverless The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, whereas, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86170212766 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70524614823 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494680851064 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.7987958383 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.25 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325900175902 0.215688989381 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170919278976 0.103423049105 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844333317556 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23460750408 0.15604864568 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096563653971 0.0819641961636 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.