The digram below shows the plan for rebuilding shopping center in central town.
The maps below show the layout of a shopping mall before (level 1) and after (level 2)
the construction.
The map illustrates the transformation of the shopping mall containing two floors in the centre of the town.
From an overall perspective, it is evident that the building will witness significant changes. In the future, more service places will be added to the mall and some facilities will also be updated. Especially, there is the appearance of some kind of entertainments like cinema, souvenir shop and among other.
On the first level, the fast-food restaurants on the top left corner will be replaced by the souvenir shop with the larger size. While the ATM on the top will stay the same, the shop on the right of it will be converted into a cafe. On the left-hand side, an escalator will be installed along with a lift in the middle of the floor. The rest of the first level will be used by shop which will expand longer in the following years.
On the second floor, there will be a package and ATM built on the top of the level whereas the shops on the top right-hand will be reduced in size. Similar to the first floor, there will be the presence of an escalator and a lift. In addition, the shops on the bottom of the building centre will be redesigned into a cinema.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, whereas, while, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 1.00243902439 1297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52093023256 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55671842133 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474418604651 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.1309974718 43.030603864 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.3636363636 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 5.23603664747 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116008665747 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609720716909 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529071117797 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986901745383 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489357178338 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.