Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 391, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...itted to bring and use phones during the school time. Firstly, children go to th...
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Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...chool time. Firstly, children go to the school mainly for studying, carrying mob...
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Line 2, column 266, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g their lectures. This might lead to the failure of certain courses in the term. ...
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Line 3, column 25, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...in the school. Secondly, some students cant afford phones and when other children b...
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Line 4, column 227, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... them to the school. But this could also be done by calling from the telephone av...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87637362637 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29624811463 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508241758242 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1872763872 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.333333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2666666667 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.473224936307 0.244688304435 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176114559397 0.084324248473 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132544759281 0.0667982634062 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.294304689487 0.151304729494 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102547900589 0.056905535591 180% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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