Some people think that companies and private individuals, not governments, should pay to clean up the pollution they have produced. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?
There is a school of thought holds that private institutions had better to pay for the cleaning expenses of pollution which they have caused. Personally, I strongly believe this is the organization's responsibility, not the government and I would elaborate on my view with the following reasons.
First and foremost, companies have to take charge of this work as they are the main contributors to the degradation of nature. Industrial areas, namely factories, continuously release a huge amount of carbon emission day by day, which insanely deteriorate to mankind. To be precise, Hanoi’s suburbs regularly suffer from dense dust and smoke from manufacturers, leading to the emergence of numerous serious diseases. As a consequence, more and more people are facing with a severe threat to their own health and this even could cost their lives.
Moreover, I firmly assert that the national tax revenue is not used for non- governmental enterprise’s fault as it is resident’s mutual property. It is unnecessary for the whole community to sacrifice their efforts and money for a situation that is not their responsibility. In addition, the state also have to care about the other domestic issues, such as the expenditures for infrastructure and education development beside the environment. They need to operate and maintain the inhabitant’s standard of living in all aspects. However, environmental deterioration is able to be improved if the government and the individuals join hand together along with appropriate approach and well- prepared proposals.
In conclusion, it is evident that private companies should pay for their detrimental activities under any kinds and every member of society ought to be more environmentally conscious.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'organizations'' or 'organization's'?
Suggestion: organizations'; organization's
...sonally, I strongly believe this is the organizations responsibility, not the government and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49077490775 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29496947558 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645756457565 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.9013330745 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146802977247 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484687312935 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573024148286 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940224467043 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461104578146 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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