Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is it the case? What can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?
Nowadays, it is often seen that museums and historical places attract more outer visitors, not domestic people. Therefore, in this essay, I will elaborate on some main reasons as well as feasible solutions that should be considered in order to increase the flow of local people.
There are several causes that shed light on why domestic people are not interested in museums and ancient sites as tourists are. First of all, because of being born and raised here, citizens had an opportunity to visit these places at least once, therefore they neither want to spend money nor time on paying a visit there again. In addition, humans mostly are impressed by the novelty as well as curious about what they haven’t seen before. For instance, plenty of Asians desire to gaze at landmarks or castles in Europe. On the other hand, travelers from Europe fall in love with natural scenes and artwork in their eastern continent.
Nevertheless, there are various proper schemes to encourage local citizens. First and foremost, the government can organize public events or exhibitions with unique and creative concepts in some special commemorations in order to appeal to the locals. Another effective method is taking advantage of mass media to market museums and historical places such as social networks, television, etc., to create an impression in the residents’ eyes, thence the percentage of local inhabitants can be improved.
In conclusion, although heritage sites do not engage the residents to come there more often due to some factors, there are some workable approaches that can be implemented in order to spur them to drop in these places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, well, as to, at least, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13011152416 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66206306977 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646840148699 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1342463807 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.454545455 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0909090909 7.06120827912 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316153514345 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08762579067 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064507733083 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151128076095 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318121506009 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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