The bar chart illustrates population trends globally by percentage from 1950 to 2040.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph describes detailed information about rural and urban global population along with different age groups during the year 1950 to 2040. Units are measured in percentage.
Overall, the total number of people especially 15 to 65years of age groups shows dramatic increase over the given period.
To begin with the trends in population, urban citizens was mere 5% in 1950, which steadily increased by the following years and reached about over 35% at the end of the graph. On the other hand, even though total global population rose significantly to 45% from 10%, the people in rural areas remained almost same with around 5% from 1950 to 2040.
Regarding the changes in the age demographic, as compared to below 15 and over 65years, the middle aged groups was surged sharply to 35% from 6% in 1950. Children below 15 was started with 3% in 1950 and gradual grows to 5% in 1960, then it shows slight fluctuation and ends in approximately 6% in 2040. Likewise, elder people also undergone mild variation in early years the trends stabilised with 5% over the given years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ere 5% in 1950, which steadily increased by the following years and reached about...
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...fluctuation and ends in approximately 6% in 2040. Likewise, elder people also und...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, likewise, regarding, so, then, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88108108108 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51884932046 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589189189189 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5932799864 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.875 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 5.23603664747 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145419160797 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625109270473 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566249369392 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903016301249 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587536612724 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.