You have been renting an apartment in an English-Speaking Country. The landlord has been very helpful and friendly. Now you are leaving, and one of your friends would like to move into the apartment.
Write a letter to your landlord.
In your letter
Explain when and why you are leaving
Thank your landlord for the help
Tell him about your friend
Dear Mr. Ford,
I am writing this letter to inform you that my lease is expiring, and I will be moving from your apartment by the end of this month.
I have been selected for the role in the upcoming series on Netflix and the production house is offering me a lead role and shooting for the series will be around Seattle. As you know that Seattle is far from Surrey and travelling daily would be very difficult for me. I am planning to move on the 29th of November from Glory Residences (Apartment # 106), which is near Hawthorne Rotary Park.
You have helped me many times and I want to thank you for all your guidance. I remember that you helped me with information on how to find jobs and you also help me with your contacts each time I asked for help. It means a lot to a new landed immigrant, and I really appreciate it.
One of my best friends, (Mr. Manjunath) who is cinematographer from Australia, is moving to Surrey. I have explained to him about the location and convenience of this apartment, and he is interested in renting this place. If there is a change in the rentals kindly let me know, I could inform him. He will call and speak to you about the rental agreement tomorrow.
Thanks again for all your help, I will come into your office to complete the paperwork for moving out on Tuesday.
Regards,
Prakash
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Ford, I am writing this letter to inform you t...
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Line 7, column 283, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... immigrant, and I really appreciate it. One of my best friends, Mr. Manjunath wh...
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Line 13, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...k for moving out on Tuesday. Regards, Prakash
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1096.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45528455285 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48891393711 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 329.4 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.1359336387 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3333333333 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253086096541 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800032263264 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674140115437 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143851055162 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482326404363 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.