Advances in science and technology
The most recent hundred years have seen quick and dramatic improvements in many areas, including medication, transport, assembling and correspondences. Over that period our lives have changed in manners that our folks and grandparents could just have longed for, however the inquiry we should pose is whether the world is a superior spot to live in .
There have plainly been many advantages. Advances in clinical science have brought remedies for once lethal illnesses and this has essentially expanded the life expectancy we can expect. Information technology has permitted us to contact companions or associates worldwide at the snap of a mouse. We would now be able to assemble data, deal with our financial balance or shop without venturing outside our home. Also, work saving gadgets, such as clothes washers and microwaves have made ordinary assignments a lot simpler.
In any case, the way that life has worked on in such countless ways doesn't imply that every one of the improvements have been positive. For instance, the emphasis on acquiring the latest technology has made people progressively materialistic. We also tend to lead more isolated lives than our parents did, with less worry for others. The resulting breakdown of customary social ties can leave the older and other weak people without the help they need. Among other major issues we face are the drug culture, and the consistently present danger of illegal intimidation.
To summarize, we have gained incredible headway throughout the most recent hundred years however there are as yet many significant issues to handle. This likely could be a preferred chance to live over any past age however ideally the future will be even better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 349, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... the world is a superior spot to live in . There have plainly been many advant...
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Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
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Line 5, column 358, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orry for others. The resulting breakdown of customary social ties can leave the o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, for instance, such as, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22463768116 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77800121031 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655797101449 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3032693152 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0814445642054 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0261467705819 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519002822674 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0441863645065 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577153920819 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.