lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income unfortunately tourism can also a source of problems if it is not managed correctly describe the advantage and disadvantage of tourism in modern word do you think benefits of tourism away its drawbacks
It is considered that a plethora of places in the globe depend on the tourism sector because it is the only one source of income. Unfortunately, it creates a some obstacles if it is not managed correctly. This essay will elaborate the pros and cons along with my perspective.
To commence with, there are several advantage of tourism industry such as it boost to the economics growth, provide jobs for people's as well as also beneficial for hotel and airline industries. To explain it, through the tourism, individuals get a chance to employment not only well educated but those who have not enough knowledge. Apart from that, it increases the economics development. To epitome, in 2018, the Tourism Development Corporation has been running campaign in "Incredible India" the slogan of this campaign is "Atithi Devo Bhava." As a result, this corporation and encourage the tourism development.
Why tourism has some problems if it is not managed well? there are a number of reasons behind this situation like a terrorism that deterioration of the beauty of historical and other places. Furthermore, it also affects to the privacy of alternatives. On the other words, when tourist explore the places there can be chances to occur misshapening because some people do illegal action in the public places. Secondly, it affects to the art, beauty, arrangements and structure of the beautiful areas. For instance, many historical places and monuments places where people write a names on the walls. Thus, ruins the beauty of places.
To recapitulate, although, tourism has a some drawbacks however in my opinion it has a lot of breakthroughs such as economic growth, create employments, increases the income of hotel and airline industries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, apart from, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25177304965 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0992197762 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556737588652 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5939490928 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240652886147 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696307823968 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735517774267 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135449363379 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169353020049 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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