The graph below shows four countries of residence of overseas students in Australia
The line graph depicts information about the students who came from Indonesia, Hong Kong, Malaysia and Singapore in Australia from 1982 to 2000.
Overall, it can be manifested that overseas students from all the four countries augmented over the period of time. Notably, the three countries surpassed Malaysia by the end of the period with students from Indonesia found to be the highest.
Initially, in 1982,out of the four countries only students from Malaysia there staying in Australia and this figure increased from 5000 students to just under 10000 students till 1993.Whereas,the figures from other three countries were almost negligible till 1987.During the next five years, they rose sharply with only Hong Kong having some flatuations. From 1993 onwards Malaysia, Singapore and Hong Kong had almost similar figures and they ended between 15000 to just under 20000 by the end of 2000.
Interestingly, there was a dramatic increase in the number of students coming from Indonesia with its peak in 1998 at 26000 students. In 2000, there were 23000 Indonesian students in Australia as there was a slight dropped in interim year
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...l the four countries augmented over the period of time. Notably, the three countries surpassed...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...from Malaysia there staying in Australia and this figure increased from 5000 stud...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Whereas
... to just under 10000 students till 1993.Whereas,the figures from other three countries ...
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Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to just under 10000 students till 1993.Whereas,the figures from other three countries ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...t under 10000 students till 1993.Whereas,the figures from other three countries were...
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Suggestion: During
...ntries were almost negligible till 1987.During the next five years, they rose sharply ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24175824176 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67268019373 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.6170083842 43.030603864 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.285714286 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216446441925 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11080941996 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683809315874 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139044006133 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365939477992 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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