It is true that in some countries grandparents play a significant role in bringing up children. This trend has both positive and negative sides. Let’s look at the positive side first
From many ages, bringing up children is not only a parents’ duty but also a significant role of grandparents as well in some countries. While I agree that this trend has positive effects, I still believe that there are some negative ones in contrast.
Firstly, about the positive side. Grandparents are more careful in looking after their children. The children’s parents are usually working parents - they are busy at work but still have to take care of them. As a result, they may let the grandparents be responsible for that. Grandparents pay attention to their children in every detail so that they will never be afraid of being hungry, cold, or sick. Many children say that they were fatter, in a healthy way, when living with grandparents for just a summer. This is considered as evidence that the grandparents love their children and always want to give them the best things they have. Moreover, some children feel that their grandfathers and grandmothers are more supportive and warmer since they have not got much love from their parents because they have a lot of things in life to maintain. It is proven that when grandparents play a role in bringing up children, they really give positive effects to them.
On the other hand, children brought up by grandparents still face some negative problems. The biggest, clearest one must be the generation gap. As the younger are open-minded with everything in their life while the older are much more conservative, this more or less happens in all families. The children are curious about the entire world out there and they may want to try new or even weird things. That is the way how little boys and girls get knowledge. However, their grandparents usually prevent them from doing what they want because of, mainly, just a simple reason: “It is not good for you”. Sometimes, this reason is unconvincing and can increase unworthy conflicts which can harm the kinship. Although grandparents do not let their children do something just because they want to protect them, this is still a considerable problem that not many people can find a good solution to deal with.
In short, I admit that when grandparents bring up children, positive effects are undeniable, but there is still a negative side existing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, moreover, really, so, still, well, while, in contrast, in short, as a result, more or less, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94778067885 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7027373578 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522193211488 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9259319765 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.75 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.15 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296993187269 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104493458032 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096205769307 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237821210464 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857710658766 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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