Children today are not as fit and healthy as in the past. Discuss the causes for this situation with relevant examples and give your opinion on possible solutions.
Despite the growth of living conditions, the young generation is under unfit and unhealthy physique compare to the past, which we have to put into consideration both the causes and solutions.
The foremost well-known cause of children's poor physical and mental health is letting them access huge amounts of information without restriction. The closest reason can be parents, due to their hectic life, or unstoppable spoil, which anything could thrive their kids fill with obsession, or under imitation. As a result, many diseases are involved, and children mental’s health and behaviors are also affected. Another significant but underestimated root for this matter is the inactive lifestyle and unhealthy eating habits. When adolescents are virtually believed to be healthy and less likely to have any problems to concern, but if it may happen, they will have a high chance to get better, in fact, it is not since they do not fully develop.
However, there is nothing impossible to handle the problem of not having a fit and healthy body in youngsters. The top priority solution is the parents should make the time for their children in any circumstance in such activities like taking an eye on them while using the Internet, or participating in some events, checking their meals. Besides, they can register for family-teaching classes to become their children's role models. Furthermore, schools and the community should organize programs to raise awareness and arrange outdoor activities for both students and parents.
Since our future generation directly affects the development of the country, we should take action now before it may become a serious problem with unpredictable results.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, while, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36194029851 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88025624386 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660447761194 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9485048026 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.636363636 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144760228643 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506678263815 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0212572525675 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729789590865 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348529099539 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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