People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who change jobs frequently. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, global tourism is one of the biggest industries in the world which brought a lot of positive impacts on many countries. however, it still causes some negative effects on local people and the environment. In my opinion, I think that the positive impacts are far more than negative.
Admittedly, a growing trend of international tourism has catalyzed both local and private national income. First and foremost, with the expanding number of the tourism which will increase the country’s GDP and can sustain their economic artery. For example, monaco is a country that was on the verge of bankruptcy but with the development of tourism, the country reinvigorate a sluggish economy. Accordingly, monaco has become a wealthy country. Additionally, because of the tourism demand, it enables the country to create more job opportunities. For instance, the hotel, transportation, shopping mall, or tour guides. Therefore, it can improve local individuals’ well-being.
however, there are also some negative impacts when a lot of tourists influx in. one of the main reasons is that the individual who lives in the area will be disturbed by the noise and presence of tourists. Furthermore, the precious environment will have a big chance of being destroyed. Nevertheless, this noise pollution and environmental vandalism can be enforced and improved by law. For example, hallstatt is a prominent attraction that harassed by tourists for many years. Consequently, with the government regulations and restrictions on the number of tourists, hallstatt has perked up the chaotic environment and local economy as well.
In conclusion, it is important that government should restrict the tourism industry to prevent inhabitants be disturbed. Personally, the advantages of international tourism still exceed the disadvantages.
- In many countries people now wear western style dress such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing Why is this Is this a positive or negative development 61
- Many people work long hours leaving very little time for leisure activities Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages 67
- In many countries people now wear western style dress such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing Why is this Is this a positive or negative development 73
- International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places At the same time there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages 73
- Some people think that there should be a complete ban on all forms of advertising To what extend do you agree or disagree 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60931899642 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23378146008 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587813620072 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0212989356 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9444444444 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61111111111 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0557732484191 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.016970866208 0.084324248473 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0272585549885 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0300989409863 0.151304729494 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018936185637 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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