he plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
The maps illustrate the details regarding the proposed changes for the existing university sports center.
Overall, the maps highlight the striking features of the university sports club from being as ordinary to a modernized area. Similarly, various other amenities and infrastructure with regard to sports shop, café will also be part of this club development.
As the first map reveals, a square pool of 25m wide in the center is enclosed by seating and changing rooms on either side, with a reception before the entrance in the south, and a gym in the northern part. Also, the center is provided with two outdoor courts with little space in between, one is west to the changing room and the other is east to the seating area.
However, dramatic changes will be made in future, the old outdoor court to the west is replaced to make way for setting up the leisure pool, and it will be connected to an old changing room followed by the pool in the central part and seating area. Another fascinating development will be the extension of the gym in the north, and erection of a new sports hall, two dance studios in the eastern side. Additionally, a sports shop and café are going to be built at south-west and south-east corners next to the new changing rooms on each side. In contrast, reception will remain unaltered during these modifications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...the existing university sports center. Overall, the maps highlight the striking...
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...also be part of this club development. As the first map reveals, a square pool ...
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...the other is east to the seating area. However, dramatic changes will be made i...
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... However, dramatic changes will be made in future, the old outdoor court to the west is r...
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...gym in the north, and erection of a new sports hall, two dance studios in the eastern ...
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...os in the eastern side. Additionally, a sports shop and café are going to be built at ...
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... unaltered during these modifications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, regarding, similarly, so, in contrast, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 233.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84549356223 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65820847878 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540772532189 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4595482549 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.444444444 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8888888889 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 5.23603664747 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0929328263149 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482461353622 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031031764997 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0669488817316 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392991784824 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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