College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
College is the place where students acquire knowledge and skills that are important for many reasons, including long-term financial gain, job stability, career satisfaction and success outside of the workplace. This is why it is beneficial for everyone to attend college. However, it is also important for students to choose their field of study not only relying on the availability of jobs but on their passion for the field. Let’s look at it more closely.
First of all, when students apply for college it is crucial to choose the field that they like they will be successful. There is a saying that if you do what you are passionate about the money will always follow. That means when people do what they like they will be specialists in that field and their success is guaranteed. On the other hand, when students are forced to choose among the fields that provide more job opportunities they may not succeed. Because they will always feel that they are created for something different. And they eventually will fail.
Additionally, when students concentrate their choice on the things that they love it is highly probable that they will achieve great happiness. To be happy does not mean to be happy only in personal life. It means that you should be happy by doing the things that you are passionate about. There are cases when people immerse in the work that they do not like and they grow depressed about their life. Therefore, it is to be happy and healthy it is certain that everyone should do whatever they like.
In conclusion, it is important for students to choose the field of their study concentrating on their passion. Moreover doing the things that they like will result in achieving great success and happiness in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...r study concentrating on their passion. Moreover doing the things that they like will re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 299.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85953177258 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51916513861 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 215.323595506 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451505016722 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3705367756 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4705882353 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5882352941 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 5.21951772744 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254485225072 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890844710509 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118050665776 0.0758088955206 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181244090653 0.150359130593 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769312115698 0.0667264976115 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 100.480337079 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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