In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with
other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes
the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
In Britain, when someone gets old, they usually live in houses dedicated to taking care of all of their needs. Most of these places are government paid which creates an increasing controversy about who should fund these older's retirement houses. Although state-controlled homes are suitable places with regular facilities and excellent nursing services, the private sites offer better facilities, with the most customized service for every tenant, allowing them to feel at home or even better.
Even though everybody thinks that older people should spend their last days living quietly, not many are agree on who should pay for the care of the elders. I believe that the state should provide good services for the adult people, allowing them to be relaxed and have a dignified life. That is the less that government must guarantee to their citizen. After spending forty or more years working, in some cases, paying taxes, the working class expects to be taken care of by the time they get old.
I firmly believe that public homes must be excellent not only in their
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
... last days living quietly, not many are agree on who should pay for the care of the e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 178.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02247191011 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41240952833 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691011235955 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3502577313 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.75 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335285171466 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123479026356 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751547566986 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183940467317 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114443961319 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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