In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with
other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes
the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
The importance of taking care of older people in any society has to be a major; many of them can not live alone because they suffer a complicated illness or can move as before. It is hard for them to see that their abilities do not match the same anymore. They are a precious part of our history.
In my personal experience, I have an old aunt who lived alone in another city far away from our family, and unfortunately, She fell sick, so We had to decide to move her out to a place where She stayed with a nurse all the time. In our case, the government did not pay for this cares when She worked her whole life for the public administration and, It was not fair.
From my point of view, the government has to give this care to all the citizens without any distinction. It is a right people win during their adult life, paying taxes and contributing to the economy. It is necessary to remember that they gave their knowledge to the community and their youngest days. Also, We do not forget that many older people do not have families to help afford and need a hand from the government to live with dignity or just live. As a society, We must demand our authorities the required politics. All the persons deserve to live in a place where They can feel safe, accompanied, and happy, just resting and enjoying their last days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ur case, the government did not pay for this cares when She worked her whole life fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36693548387 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45542665483 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576612903226 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9778756095 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4545454545 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289723104118 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933618737765 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688024946196 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183670687224 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338955806113 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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