some people say that cellphones have improved humans' life. Others believe that cell phones have caused problems.
The advent of cellphones has greatly transformed our society in terms of communication and approach to knowledge. While many people opine that these devices corrupt our community, I argue that their minuses pale in comparison with their benefits.
On the one hand, this technology does pose grave ramifications. To begin with, its users can run a higher risk of contracting pathologies such as eye strain, myopia and obesity. These consequences boil down to their sitting too much while their eyes fixate on the harmful artificial light from the screen. This action, thus, has a detrimental impact on people who rely heavily on digital devices. In addition, these individuals are also prone to leading a secluded lifestyle because they hardly contact with anyone outside the virtual world, which wreaks havoc on their interpersonal skills and instigates inferiority complex talking with people around them.
On the other hand, their disadvantages, however, can eclipse the aforementioned drawbacks. These phones catalyze the interaction between people and foreigners living in distant areas. The communication of those individuals helps both of them hone their language skills and gives them a chance to delve deeper into each other’s cultures. To give an illustration, I used to converse indirectly with an Indonesian guy before and learned a lot about Indonesia’s cuisine and traditions, which I could not learn at school. Not only does the Internet connect people with others from different nations but it also helps people have more opportunities to communicate with estranged relatives and cement their relationships. For instance, many exchange students utilize cellphones to keep in touch with their family members and friends back in their homelands to mitigate homesickness in an exotic land.
In conclusion, I assert that cellphones bring more benefits than demerits since they help people learn and understand each other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51505016722 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94114404545 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66220735786 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8089659451 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.785714286 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109369914864 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392054337197 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400719060127 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0712445012807 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367026245014 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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