You recently encountered some problems with public transportation service in your area. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company and say:
What were the problems
Explain how these problems affect the public
Suggest what changes could be made to improve the situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Jane and I am writing this letter to complain about the bus system in district 3, Ho Chi Minh city. I am a local student who uses buses every day to go to school as well as daily traveling to work.
A couple of months ago, many buses have been often late from 10 to 20 minutes, especially bus number 150 from district 3 to Thu Duc district which is late for more than 30 minutes. Those bus routines are extremely vital for the public in general and for students in particular because they connect the city with the municipal university village. The additional time not only make all student difficult to go to class on time, but it also ends up a hectic schedule for people who have to spend lots of time in transportation.
I hope that the authorities of the bus system can regulate the buses operation promptly due to the sack of the community. I am looking forward to your response soon.
Yours faithfully,
Jane
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 64, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'buses'' or 'bus's'?
Suggestion: buses'; bus's
...ties of the bus system can regulate the buses operation promptly due to the sack of t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, in general, in particular, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43181818182 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50245230963 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693181818182 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.6731533147 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 4.34317383033 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0452029356613 0.216113520407 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0226836162253 0.0766984524023 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0249615594478 0.0603063233224 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0248744008133 0.12726935374 20% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00543187965102 0.0580467560999 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.