The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

The bar chart illustrates the rate of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales over a period of almost a century.
Overall, it can be seen easily that more and more residents of these two countries chose to buy houses rather than rent houses.
Having a closer look at the chart, the rate of rented households was almost 80% in 1918, at its peak, more than three times higher than that of owned accommodation.In 1939, the data on households in owned increased slightly by nearly 10%, was half as many as the percentage of rented accommodation, then remained unchanged. In 1971, the data on these categories were equal at 50%.
The percentage of households in owned continually experienced an upward trend and reached a peak at approximately 70% whereas that of rented accommodation suffered from a sharp decrease to only 31% in 2021. In 2011, the figure for owned house declined slightly by 5% while that for rented accommodation grew to 36%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, then, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89090909091 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93557390012 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.41792682 43.030603864 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.5 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341169433882 0.215688989381 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155876498256 0.103423049105 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116693861319 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201662930312 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115401274242 0.0819641961636 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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