Explain some ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can government do to address the environmental problems? What can individual people do
Humans are responsible for a variety of environmental problems, but we could take steps to reduce the damage that we are causing to the earth. This essay will discuss the environmental problems and measures that people could take to address them.
Two of the biggest threat to the environment are air pollution and waste. Gas emissions from factories and exhaust fumes released from vehicles lead to global warming, which results in many natural disasters including fierce storms and long-term droughts in the future. Because of the rapid growth of the global population, humans are producing greater quantities of waste. Waste such as plastic bags and glass bottles from daily activities contaminates the earth and pollutes rivers and oceans. This does not only destroy the humans’ water sources, but also have a detrimental impact on the ecosystem of marine animals.
Both governments and individuals certainly could contribute to environmental protection through environmental laws and reducing personal waste every day. The government could promulgate policies in favour of the environment to limit garbage from factories and impose harsh punishment on businesses that break it. On top of that, each person could help protect the environment by using public transports instead of private vehicles and using reusable materials instead of traditional ones. Buses and electric trains are becoming increasingly common in big cities around the world to serve citizens and supermarkets even provide reusable bags for their customers.
In conclusion, the planet is being harmed by humans in many different ways, but it is possible to efforts of governments and individuals in preserving nature and dealing with environmental problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 56, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...the planet is being harmed by humans in many different ways, but it is possible to efforts of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in conclusion, such as, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53759398496 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89962725269 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635338345865 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4079425613 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.75 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150649439076 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518026341937 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425933726899 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918919360694 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331342912859 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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