A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some volunteering/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter:
• Explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum
• Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful
• Give details of whom you would be available for work
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is James Smith and I am writing this letter with regard to the part-time voluntary job at Central Museum. I saw your advertisement in the Times Newspaper on November 3rd, and I would like to demonstrate my interest in this position.
To begin with, apart from my full-time job in the administrative sales of my company, I am entirely free on the evenings. Therefore, it is feasible for me to allocate some time for this matter. Moreover, I live not far from the museum which makes it convenient for me to commute.
In addition, due to my sales experience and quality to build a good rapport with others, I consider myself a qualified candidate to act as a guide to show people around the site and give them interesting information to gain more people’s attraction. Besides, I have been fascinated by the all historical and unearthed objects which are available there since I was a student.
Thank you for your consideration in advance, and I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
James Smith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, apart from, in addition, to begin with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82320441989 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91489744023 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674033149171 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.5577005177 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8888888889 4.34317383033 251% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208790640236 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850733465867 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601217197312 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123116779497 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668501747489 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.