The picture below shows how a hot balloon works.
The diagram illustrates different parts in the structure of a hot air balloon and its operation.
Overall, the hot air balloon comprises of four major components, namely the envelope, the skirt, the burners and the basket. It is also clear that the balloon is supplied with hot air to make it fly.
The balloon, which is one of the main parts, is called an envelope made of different layers of gores and panels. While there is a parachute valve at the top functioning as a self-sealing flap, a skirt is attached to the bottom of the balloon which is connected to the basket with strong ropes. The basket provides enough space for passengers and two propane cylinders. Above the basket, there are two burners used to release air into the envelope to make it rise to the sky.
With regard to how the balloon operates, the mixture of propane and the air produces flame to fill the balloon with the hot air via the burners, at which point the hot air inside is lighter than the cold air outside and the whole structure floats upwards. In order to descend, the parachute valve is left open so that the hot air can escape at a controlled rate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 30, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54854368932 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43306569024 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519417475728 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6696024505 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.111111111 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177610038454 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798282709085 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584209927849 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127129993451 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462827098666 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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