The chart shows the employment status of adults in the US in 2003 and 2013.
The bar chart provided depicts the employment categories of adult population in the US over a period of 10 years from 2003 to 2013.
Overall, it is evident that the percentage of medical, business and unemployed in the US witnessed a downward trend after a period surveyed whereas the opposite was true of the remaining figures.
As can be seen from the bar chart given, there was a surge of the proportion of adults employed in education training and hotel industry from 2003 to 2013 to about 18% and 19%, respectively. The portion of business ranked in the first in 2003 with almost 47% and plummeted to merely 28% in 2013, while that of self employed leapt between 2003 and 2013 to approximately 31% and ranked in the first position.
As far as the bar chart is concerned, there was a negative correlation between the figure for medical and that of building, in which the former crashed to about 10% and the latter bounced to almost 20% in 2013. The percentage of unemployed witnessed a slight decrease to merely 5% from 2003 to 2013.
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- Some people think that the government should provide free education at every level However some says that individuals should pay for their university education Discuss both the views and give your opinion 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65760869565 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64485246568 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.3348321101 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.833333333 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6666666667 22.9334400587 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349150983865 0.215688989381 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17530702017 0.103423049105 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108175099159 0.0843802449381 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213081419477 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128128184615 0.0819641961636 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.