The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in thepopularity of fashion clothes and consume goods. Do you agree or disagree?
The intention of people to imitate one another is demonstrated in the popularity, such as mode and consumption goods. I am personally agree that vogue and retail goods are the common areas for imitation amongs modern people.
Several sports and music entertainmet recently have become a lifestyle for milenial society. Since it became a popular trend, teenagers tend to imitate their favorite artist or players in the way that they get dressed. Cristiano Ronaldo, the most popular humans in instagram, has inspired a million of people to fashion as well as buy such things which are persuaded by him on social media.
Furhtermore, the phenomenon also affect people in terms of deciding whether or not they have to purchase such stuff. In recent days, it is normal to see a lot of celebrities advertising products, however, this condition gives huge impact on people preference to afford stuff, such furniture, healthcare medicine or even make up. The bigger the celebrites are, the greater influence they can affect.
Despite of this appeal, some individuals disagree with this assumption. Some people might afford something which is precisely identic to celebrities; however, this is not called imitation. People purchase stuff because thy need it. A product which is advertised by artist shows that it has good quality and worth enough to afford for people.
In conclusion, I strongly belive that there are strong interest of today’s socitey to imitate and are much more rely on celebrities preference as famous figures to buy or wear something.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to stuff'
Suggestion: to stuff
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and worth enough to afford for people. In conclusion, I strongly belive that th...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'celebrities'' or 'celebrity's'?
Suggestion: celebrities'; celebrity's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, as for, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19920318725 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75682817486 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641434262948 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1602559652 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.384615385 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0665702091754 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0228548460735 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310267946649 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0368790959699 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402927379507 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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