Do you agree or disagree that parents are more involved in their children's education than in the past.
It is undoubtedly true that education has shaped the lives of so many people.Honestly speaking, I think that parents in this contemporary age pay more attention to their children's academic activities far better than the past.I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in my body paragraphs.
To begin with, these days parents are more educated and because of practical experience and mistakes they made during their time so they wouldn't want their children to be a victim.Therefore they tend to pay more attention to their children's school affairs.However, majorities of parent in the past are illiterate, all they do is to engage in farming which has been their routine on a daily basis.In Fact, few that had the opportunity of attending schools only completed half way and don't have financial means of getting to the university.Drawing from my own experience my mum studied medicine at the University of Idaho.In her first year, she failed her core courses since she never had anyone to put her through, but later she was able to juggle things around and got stabilized with time.So when i picked up interest to study medicine from the same school, she guided me solely on each subjects due to her previous experience, and with this , choosing medicine has never been a regret for me.Additionally, she provided all the necessary materials that could make each subject a cakewalk. On the other hand, few of my classmates that their parents are less knowledgeable couldn't survive in medical school.
Furthermore, so many opportunities are opened to intelligent children, which is why most parents try to get involved with their children's school affairs.To be more specific, there are a lot of scholarships, free jobs that could change the life of the upcoming generation if they are properly guided by their parents.For instance, I got a masters program at the University of Michigan without paying a penny.Majorities of my friends were surprised, because they all knew that it is one of the ivy league , which is quite arduous to get.But this actually came through my mum because, she made me attempt an examination that made me qualified to getting a fully funded scholarship.If she hadn't been a watch guide for me i wouldn't have secured admission for my masters program.
In light of the reasons mentioned, I believe that parents focus more on their children's school activities currently than in the past.This is because they want to save their kids from making errors, and because they always want to see them at the top
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, furthermore, honestly, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, i think, in fact, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2124.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99764705882 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97905895731 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557647058824 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 85.0 20.1344086022 422% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 368.333218703 48.9658058833 752% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 424.8 100.406767564 423% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 85.0 20.6045352989 413% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.0 5.45110844103 532% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.5376344086 614% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233479804054 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14591252023 0.076458572812 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475927482443 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163568165876 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414670641568 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 44.6 11.7677419355 379% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -14.8 58.1214874552 -25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.10430107527 260% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.4 10.1575268817 358% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.9 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.34 8.01818996416 141% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 10.002688172 310% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 36.0 10.0537634409 358% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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