In some countries around the world men and women are having children late in life What are the reasons for this development What are the effects on society and family life

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In some countries around the world men and women are having children late in life. What are the reasons for this development? What are the effects on society and family life?

After marrying, the wife got pregnant pretty late all over the world. There are various reasons for this problem, and have an impact dramatically on society and family life.

There are two key factors influencing this issue. Firstly, they have a working schedule up to the ear, they work from monday to friday or saturday, even extra time on the weekend, averaging over fifty hour per week. So when they run out of steam, become exhausted when coming home. Secondly, the individual finances are poor, and difficult. The increasing number of standing, quality in life, and the cost of living is a rapid climb. This has pushed a lot of couples into trouble and disadvantage after marrying. So they think that if they have children, they need to be financially sound to give their children a good life both physically and mental. Thirdly, the environmental habitat is more and more seriously polluted, it poses a threat to healthy humans, and mainly causes diseases which make pregnancy and giving birth becoming obstacles and difficulties.

With the reasons above, it is detrimental to society and family life. In terms of family life, they feel fatigued when they have to put pressure on their parents and relatives because traditional cultures which estimate a real family need children. This is an original mental mental disease which poses a threat in careers such as reduced working productivity, affects their network, and gives a bad impression to many colleagues. In terms of society, the lack of workforce in the future when they give birth late or even can not become pregnant. Besides, these causes of age imbalance can lead to a decline in some child-related industries such as kindergartens and children's play areas which contribute to economic development.

In conclusion, there are a variety of reasons for couples who have children late after marriage. These bring drawbacks to society and family life.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
...me on the weekend, averaging over fifty hour per week. So when they run out of steam...
^^^^
Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: mental
...mily need children. This is an original mental mental disease which poses a threat in careers...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10126582278 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71130701091 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591772151899 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8856875012 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8235294118 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5882352941 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254303094481 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913876134639 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933500294286 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209207870537 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836207351766 0.056905535591 147% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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