Your friend is moving to a new house and wants your help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter you should say:
• why you are free
• how you can help
• ask questions about the new house
Dear Max,
I got super happy for you and your wife that you eventually purchased your dream house in your desirable district of the city. Actually, I’m totally free these days since I’m between jobs. My last job ended when I asked for a promotion and they came up with some absurd excuses, and in turn, I signed my resignation. Anyway, I’m totally available to give you a hand in your moving.
As you might already know, one of my brothers-in-law works in a moving furniture company. And since we are in the summer at the moment, they must be fully booked. So, I can pull some strings and ask James to send a truck on short notice. I also would be happy to help you out in packaging your stuff. I know your wife has given birth to your first child recently and I won’t let you do it single-handedly.
By the way, I can’s wait to see your new place. Tell me more about it. How big is it? And what facilities it already has? I’d say you throw a very big housewarming party there because it is your first time buying one.
Once again, congratulations on this great movement and I’m waiting for your call.
Yours truly,
Ted
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m waiting for your call. Yours truly, Ted
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, anyway, first, if, so, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47393364929 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49173742974 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682464454976 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.616007637 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.0 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1875 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0625 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425221387112 0.216113520407 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120856786417 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102415863111 0.0603063233224 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222591120786 0.12726935374 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757484449785 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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