Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people while others believe that the purpose of museum is to educate. Discuss both views and give you own opinion.
It is sometimes argued that museums should be relaxing places where people can have fun, while others debate that museums were built for inhabitants to gain knowledge. Both of these points of view will be examined in this essay.
To begin with, the argument in favor of supporting the museum as an educational place is that this location is known as the knowledgeable place due to the quantity of historical and cultural heritage contained. In fact, each historical component shows the different aspects of life and the daily activities of our ancestors. In this way, visitors who are curious about history may find museums as a useful place to learn more. Moreover, the professors, researchers, or postgraduates who need detail to write their thesis and dissertations maybe meet their needs by the knowledge provided by museums.
However, I believe that the purpose of museums is not only educating but also interesting. The first reason is that the taudio visual systems the stuff let people will feel more relaxed than just studying in school. As an illustration, the sound is added in many museums to help visitors find more information instead of feeling stressed to avoid them under pressure as gaining too much detail in a limited time. The second reason is that some the visitors come to these places just for admiring the beauty and enjoy the atmosphere here.
In conclusion, even though the major of people come to museums to find the information that is necessary for them, these places have an entertaining role for residents who visit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, while, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69831414246 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610038610039 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6196999639 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.727272727 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291732840537 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102050201269 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817383436476 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175092880487 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789140814516 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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