Because the world is changing so quickly people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
In this contemporary era,it is certainly true that the world is developing abruptly. Although some folks believe that people experience less satisfaction in recent times than in the past.However, I firmly believe that humans have gotten tremendous satisfaction in this current age. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in my body paragraphs.
To start with, it is crystal clear that science and technology hone the world.Therefore this has made life much more convenient for the masses because of so many operations which could be completed within a short period of time.In fact, people experience less stress since their life now rely solely on technology.My personal experience is a clear illustration of this.while i was in my sophomore, I was given a mini project which has to do with getting information on drugs that could predispose one to cancer. I was able to complete this project within three days, because I had access to using online sources, and this actually provided me with more than enough that I needed.However, if it were to be in the past, I would spend days getting data because I have to keep visiting hospitals for days, which could be stressful.Despite the fact that i might have interaction with the patients, but this may also cost me alot because of the duration of days that might be required to get enough data.
Furthermore, modern medical devices have saved so many lives, which in turn has made people have a longer longevity.To be more specific, so many diseases that had claimed people's life in the past have gotten a cure in the present times.For instance, many people had died of human immune virus in the past since there wasn't any medication to combat the virus.However, thanks to the non governmental organisation that has made research by not just making the drugs available, but also ensuring it is free for everyone who had contracted the virus.Besides, people with HIV now live a normal life and no longer experience inferiority complex anymore.
In light of the reasons mentioned, I believe that people are more satisfied these days. This is because people can accomplish their task faster and because it has helped in sustaining more life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, as to, for instance, i feel, in fact, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98921832884 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90584289992 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544474393531 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.1344086022 228% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 219.262649293 48.9658058833 448% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 231.375 100.406767564 230% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.375 20.6045352989 225% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.75 5.45110844103 307% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272940707052 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112190315094 0.076458572812 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059501435001 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164375524695 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271846041339 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.3 11.7677419355 215% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 24.79 58.1214874552 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 10.1575268817 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.55 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.01818996416 125% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.0537634409 203% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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