In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why is this the case? How to solve this issue?
Due to the causes such as excessive hunting and territorial exploitation, the number of plants and animals nowadays has decreased. Therefore, to overcome these cases, it is necessary to have strict laws from the government to raise people's awareness, punish illegal hunting, and provide protection for those species that are facing extinction.
The number of animals and plants are decreasing because humans keep exploiting land to expand their territory, excessive - hunting. Begin with the main reason that humans destroy forests to build houses and roads. Thousands of trees are being cut down to make way for vehicles, and small animals like squirrels and birds will lose their homes. Besides that, humans excessively hunt animals because their color and body parts are beneficial for human life, like rhinos' horns, which some believe can cure cancer, and horseshoe crab's blood, which is used to make medicine.
Governments should take measures to counter this trend. Begin by transferring flora and fauna to a new place before the urbanization of the forests. This may help the animals get a new home. In addition, for illegal logging as well as hunting, the government should enact strict laws that can be used to impose fines, even imprisonment. Finally, the government can cooperate with non-profit organizations to create awareness-raising activities and join hands in building conservation areas for endangered species of flora and fauna.
In conclusion, two of the main causes of the decline in animal and plant species are excessive hunting and territorial exploitation. However, these can be managed through tougher regulations around the land clearing and limiting animal hunting.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, as for, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45075757576 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82758622486 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0282634779 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.692307692 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135714614897 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057459851877 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611985643327 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821850069552 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166771982678 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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