Some people think that hosting international sports events is good for the
country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
international sports events are took place regularly around the world. some people contend that being a host country brings benefits while others advocate it is bad. in my opinion, I am supportive of the positive effect of hosting international sports events.
on the one hand, hosting an international competition about sports demands many indispensable facilities, human sources, and big space. In developing countries like Vietnam, the process of preparing takes a long time and money. moreover, when many people join in such events, it is difficult to maintain security, there is an increase in crime such as thief, violence,...
on the other hand, international sporting games are terrifying opportunities to attract tourists around the world. the host nation can make sales from products or services which are provided for events such as food, drink, accommodation, transport,... furthermore, it is a crucial chance to share the culture of the country to the global network. through such events, the host country can improve the economy, level, and image.
in conclusion, although hosting international sports events demand a large amount of budget and preparation, the benefits of economic and cultural promotion are indisputable. I personally support the developing country trying to be a sports competition host country for once
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51941747573 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08883231943 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616504854369 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.274918161 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.75 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286957931639 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101521520245 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693365946513 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182470193935 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944672287476 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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