individuals can do nothing to change society. Any new developments can only be brought about by governments and large institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A common belief is held that it is impossible for individuals to make a great impact on the society without the support of the authorities or institutions. In my opinion, although it is true that organization is a necessity for any projects to run robustly, I personally believe that individuals are also important to make change.
Firstly, due to the great capital as well as the resource these big organizations have, it would be easier for them to control and perhaps change the society in positive way. By collecting money from taxes and allocating it to the right field such as environment or medical, various issues could be tackle more probably and effectively. For example, in order to support the hapless people in faraway third world countries, funding the Non-government organizations might be one of the best and fastest ways for individuals.
On the other hands, occasionally did people know that individual’s ideas or lifestyle could affect society easily and thus changing it in an unexpected way. It appears that many historical events from the past that are caused by individuals. For instance, it is not until the Wright brothers first invented the aircraft that transportation on air seemed to be a crazy idea before the 90s. Subsequently, this invention has led to the globalization of the world, where people could travesty continents within hours. In addition, for any organizations or governments to function, it requires the joint effort individuals. Innovations are usually come from individuals before it is considered, funded and released by the broad directors, leading to the progress in the society.
In conclusion, although organizations have the power and the capital to make the society changed, I would maintain that individuals are also important in the movement of change.
- The bar chart shows the number of volunteers in New Zealand who helped in sports organizations in 2010 The pie chart illustrates the number of volunteers doing different types of jobs for that same period Summarize the information by selecting and reporti 84
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- The diagram shows the process for labelling shellfish for the international market Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features 89
- Some people believe that it would be beneficial if employees worked three or four days per week rather than five or six days Why is this Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 84
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an unexpected way" with adverb for "unexpected"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ect society easily and thus changing it in an unexpected way. It appears that many historical events...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, third, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2397260274 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14667702199 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565068493151 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.572885479 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 127.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0833333333 7.06120827912 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108008439163 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399296618487 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0240088380467 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665271225437 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00921209422724 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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